Sunday, February 22, 2015

Lunacy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Upside-down,
The human Roller Coaster goes,
History, retracts,
Savagery returns, at a stone's throw,
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Sandra Feldman
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Chuy Amante 26 February 2015

Lunacy = Ego indeed it abounds in our head resounds to loving beings confounds simple love for all as we would have it we must give it or fall, fall, fall...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 February 2015

Best word choice. Deep feeling. Nicely penned.Many thanks, keep the ball rolling.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 February 2015

Killing the Innocent, With cowardice and force, Closing of Humanity, the door, As mothers weep, For their sacrificed children, - - -Really very pathetic, a scene of savagery. Very nicely envisioned. Many thanks.

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Roseann Shawiak 22 February 2015

Absolutely great poem Sandra! Perfect explanation of our world and it's evil today - it is total lunacy! All innocents are being hurt, maimed and sacrificed and for what reason? ? It is horrific and needs to be stopped now. As you stated in this poem, history retracts, savagery returns. Thank you, Sandra for this illuminating poem. RoseAnn

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