Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Luna's Cycle Comments

Rating: 5.0

In her cycle, the moon starts in the dark.
It's as if the clouds take over the night.
The wolves have nothing to howl to or bark.
With the naked eye, she is out of sight.
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Cecilia Skopec
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Romeo Della Valle 21 March 2012

Impressive! A very well crafted write about the Moon! It is rich in imagery and penning words! Your poetic talent is clearly shown in this thought provoking write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep it up! There is always time for poetry! When I am awake, I think Poetry and when I am sleeping, I dream of Poetry that is the reason why I always carry a pen and piece of blank paper! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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I love looking at the moon. You must too, to have written such a beautiful poem about it! There always seems to be a line that I really love, which I love (if that makes sense: D) . Anyway the line I love in this one is ''Like an artist made a terrible gaff.'' It made me smile and it was also a great similie! More great imagery! And another great title! I loved it!

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Colin J... 23 June 2009

Lovely poem... There is nothing quite like a Full Moon... Colin J...

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