Saturday, July 1, 2023

Luna And The Fourteen Shrews Comments

Rating: 4.7

a story poem from a while ago

it is of course again about Luna,
the cat from the neighbourhood (1.5 km away from us)
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Rajan T Renganathan 02 July 2023

You are bossing a cat now. Ha ha ha good poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 July 2023

Asjemenou! Veertien spitsmuizen aangesleept voor Sylvia, wat een kat die Luna!

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Denis Mair 01 July 2023

I think your Kitty Gaga is providing a great service: she is nature's enforcer, helping you prevent a field-mice population bomb!

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Denis Mair 01 July 2023

The cat has gone gaga over you. In it's eyes, you are not just a boss, you are like a queen!

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Denis Mair 01 July 2023

I think those little field mice have a beneficial role to play. By eating grubs, they probably prevent an excess of insects. How amazing that the cat wants to show its devotion this way!

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 July 2023

Very enjoyable. But why fourteen? Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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