Friday, August 8, 2014

Lump Of Restlessness Comments

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Lingering melody makes me cry
I wait long in sun to see my eyes dry
A feather of pure rainbow bright
Often makes my morbid day bright
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Soumita Sarkar
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Geetha Jayakumar 08 August 2014

Beautiful poem Soumita. I loved reading each lines... A tale of eternal love potent Faced a sudden death, an abrupt end. Very true said, We feel restlessness, sometimes unknown, though known why we are sad.. May be our mind dont want to accept the fact. So it is trying to ignore it. The concluding lines ends with sadness. Loved it.

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