Luminous Level.... Comments

Despite no explosion, tension comes and such activity provokes thought. But dark corners are expelled by luminosity of the light. The reality painted in memory carries sadness and wonderfully this is expressed here. We get such news daily in newspaper and TV. An amazing poem is excellently presented is very thought provoking...10

Luminosity rectify darkest corners in my memory…….you have started the poem with intense focus on the poignant scene that occupies the darkest corner of your mind! Most significantly I appreciated the pathos depicted in this thought provoking poem with a great rhythm! Thank you so much dear Sylvia for sharing! (10)

so nicely you have described childlike follies done now a days

Thank you for this wonderful write. An eye opener for everyone. Beautifully crafted write well executed.10

A brilliant poem that vividly depicts a horrendous incident that shocked the core of our hearts and minds. After reading this poem, a question is left in the mind how can young people could ever entertain the idea of committing dastardly acts. Youth are the future of tomorrow. How can the next generation be secured of heinous crimes if the minds of the young people are tainted with evil spirits.

A very saddening reality. Sometimes even the most innocent looking kids can have an evil intent without meaning to be evils and this bring us to the state of affairs in our world today. Everyday we hear on the news and see on tv the happenings around the world and this somehow could influence the minds of those young people.