Wednesday, September 21, 2016

Luminosity Comments

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The molten heart of a star has fractured.
An invisible ligature of gravity,
The corset of an aeon's passing
Galaxy, moving between the words
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Seamus O' Brian
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2016

Luminosity of universe and galaxy is wonderfully expressed in this poem. Very wise and interesting drafting is shared.10

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Seamus O Brian 26 September 2016

Thank you, Kumarmani, for visiting and reading. I so appreciate your gracious thoughts as well.

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Seamus O' Brian

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