Saturday, November 1, 2008

Lulu Island Comments

Rating: 4.6

I will sail to Island of Lulu
for there I will not be blue.
I shall have there some serenity
away from a busy crowded city.
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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Glorious poem with packed imagery to sail me away with you. (I wish!) It is romantic and beautiful. Top marks Karin Anderson

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Ency Bearis 02 November 2008

nice imagery...and wish I can be in that island..with serenity and not be blue.. A 10 Ency Bearis

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Kesav Easwaran 01 November 2008

'At night the fish dance beneath the moon as the gentle sea breeze croon'... liked immensely the image you build in these lines...good piece 10

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