Friday, June 2, 2006

Lullybye Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky cried blood…
The rivers flowed red…
The children are no longer dead.
The city concealed with cries for help
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Sierra M 05 August 2006

This is a well written poem.*Sierra*

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Brandi Young 15 June 2006

I really enjoyed this one. I think it's your best...keep writing....never stop. -brandi

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wow... i really like this poem. Very nicely written keep up the good work always and forever <3Jade<3

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