Thursday, September 1, 2011

Lullaby In B Minor Comments

Rating: 4.8

from a tiny acorn
the oak tree grows,
what a man cant find
a child will know.
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Eric Cockrell
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Patti Masterman 01 September 2011

Finally PH will let me comment on this beautiful piece. This holds so much wisdom, so much hope and love within it, balancing it perfectly on soft wings of song. I love this poem very much.

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Anthony Joseph Erangey 01 September 2011

Good solid write and a pleasing flow to it. Love the title. Well penned. Peace.

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Mark Trajano 01 September 2011

lovely and smooth! please check out mine as well and tell me how you find it! Thanks! !

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Dave Walker 01 September 2011

Fantastic poem /song. Would'nt mind The cords. Great work.

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Eric Cockrell 01 September 2011

originally wrote these lyrics back in the seventies... used to sing my daughters to sleep with this one when they were little.

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