Lullaby For Lost Generations Comments

Lost childhood and lullaby … berceuse are becoming show piece of Museum…very touchy poem with humane oscillations… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Tears, only tears speak the heaviness felt by the soul. Sorry, Sir! I started a comment, but, inspired by your thoughts, it grew into one of its own! You have described the plight of IDP's so movingly that it touches one's heart. Victims of war - inspired by Naseer Ahmed Nasir Angel

this is a very touching write indeed! ! and i wish you can write beautiful lullaby for me so i can sleep in piece! ! ! great write indeed...10++ well deserved! ! with love shashendra

Sir that was an exelent display of metaphor, so vivid, so sad, and yet so comforting as the living achevie the rapture of death.

This is wonderful. I am glad you found me so that I could find you.

Your poems are so full of startling and glorious imagery!

Some wonderfiul lines in this elegiac poem. When the song is lost, all is lost. Excellent. As always, Sandra