Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Lullaby Comments

Rating: 5.0

I must never rest,
I have to clean the house
Serve my masters
Feed the chickens
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rosalinda flores martinez
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Afzal Shauq 15 May 2009

well doen..this poem is also a great one..interesting... hope you add more poems too... it seem to me that you are capable to write more poems too... and hope you will go through my poems too..you got 10 points...++

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Ency Bearis 15 May 2009

brillant concept...nice write....10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 May 2009

'And then, I burn the leaves.' An excellent piece.10+++

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