Wednesday, May 6, 2009

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He sleeps
Never wakes up
His closed eyes are carved.
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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Kafil Uddin Raihan 04 July 2009

From his sleep He cannot wake He doesn’t know how He doesn’t know why. Excellent mam, so heart touching words, I like these......

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Saadat Tahir 06 May 2009

hi there nice poetry....too deep tried but failed to decipher it...think i need to do a coffee but the lines and flow is superb cheers...will do more of your poems later tc

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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