Saturday, October 10, 2015

Lullaby Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun hid behind the mountain,
night came softly down,
colors become weightless now.
full of care, the world is quiet.
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Liza Sud
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 10 October 2015

Beautiful lullaby, it is. Any baby would calm down to see the beautiful world in it, and eventually fall asleep without knowing. Well written. +10

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