Monday, April 25, 2005

Lullaby Comments

Rating: 4.1

Unamused at being put to bed
He struggles loudly,
Unwilling to sleep
Bribery must be my option
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Scarborough Gypsy
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Jerry Hughes 12 August 2005

in impeccably good grammar he wrote, 'you is, one-hell-of-a-good writer. Love, Jerry

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Herbert Nehrlich1 25 April 2005

This is perfect now. Is envy of the little one permitted? This poem flows so smoothly and is full of love. H

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Herbert Nehrlich1 25 April 2005

Gypsy, two and a half small nips and tucks and you got another winner. Hxx

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