Lullaby Comments

i think this is one of the best of your dear Jelena.it has both musical sound and also wonderful meaning. several thing i have to say. first you absolutely right.there had been so many wars in the world.maybe they began to spread the truth but at last its fire burnt the world and so many died.it maight be begun because of truth but it changed to the hatred. second i feel both feeling of hope and despondency to gether.the contradiction is really great.and you have combined two feelings together.the hope is in the middle verses where we may find love in a cove but the poem ends with despondency. any way i can say all the beginnings do not come to end for a little child to sing about the end. i can not say which line i love more.the whole poem is superb. muchas gracias~nb

somewhere you can hear them sing. good poem. I invite you to read my poems and comment.