Monday, November 24, 2014

Lull Me To Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have toiled all day long
Now I want to lay my head
Rest my body in serene peace
As to the world I am dead
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Valsa George
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Michael Cochrane 17 July 2022

Dear Valsa, an excellent poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 July 2022

This is a tender poem....I love the endearing poetic expression. Top score and to my favourite! !

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Paul Sebastian 08 December 2014

When the day is done By the set of sun When the night gently creep To take you on a dream trip To wander into the world of wonder Into the world of peaceful slumber Oh, what a prized rest From heaven's treasure chest! It's my thank you to your lovely poem.

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Paul Sebastian 08 December 2014

When the day is done By the set of sun When the night gently creep To take you on a dream trip To wander into the world of wonder Into the world of peaceful slumber Oh, what a prized rest From heaven's treasure chest! It's my thank you to your lovely poem.

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Rajesh.c Bose 08 December 2014

On wings of dreams I let you fly!

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Piyush Dey 05 December 2014

Beautiful write, woven with a soothing imagination. It felt like a song. lovely.

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Kee Thampi 03 December 2014

so my lovable poetess, ........ we wish to fly with you like a drembird On wings of dreams let me fly Over mountains high and valleys low Winding rivers n' rippling streams Buoyed by breeze which gently blow

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Md Asadullah 30 November 2014

Sleep is essential for a person’s health and well-being, and when one has worked hard whole day the sleep becomes more sweet and more alluring, Nice one mam :)

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Heather Wilkins 29 November 2014

let me float as an invisible spirit listen to the songs that angels sing beautiful Valsa

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Kavya . 26 November 2014

Oh wow Mam! i wish we get such kind of peace and contentment within when we go to sleep......as wen we retire at the end of the day, there are constant worries about tommorrows day........ an amazing piece of write.......loved it much as I can relate this to my personal life too and would be my dream too!

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Amitava Sur 25 November 2014

A lovely wish from a peaceful mind, dreaming resting in a peaceful haven after toiling all the day. Let the mind and soul recreate celestially with joy...... enjoyed

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Hazel Durham 25 November 2014

To sleep with peace and joy in your heart to look forward to a new dawn is a wonderful way to live with harmony as you dream of angels and the beauty of this world spread before you! Superb write!

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Rajesh Thankappan 25 November 2014

After a fruitful day a fruitful night on cards is a double bonanza! WONDERFULLY written.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 November 2014

Let me joyfully retire to my tent Joy of accomplishing the day's activities leads to dream of retirement from all action so beautifully expressed in the poem. Thank you.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 25 November 2014

A noble mind's thoughts of sleep is beautifully created in the poem and expecting for a goodnight's sleep where darkness allayed by heavenly light.......I think it can possible to one going to bed in perfect peace of mind and meditative mindset when the sleep is an experience of divine love and freedom with lot of hopes and experience of one day more is passed from the calendar fruitfully.Great writing.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 November 2014

Have a nice sleep during the night, getup early with the sun, come to your work and spread light, we cannot relieve you of your duties at the moment. We need you and your beautiful poems like this......10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2014

Let me float as an invisible spirit In the calming stillness of this celestial night Listen to the songs that angels sing Where darkness, allayed by heavenly light very nicely envisioned. Thanks.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 November 2014

Oh! such a wonderful piece on beautiful sleep......Valsa......very well scripted with soothing words....great write as always......10/10

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Abekah Emmanuel 24 November 2014

What else can the great mind of a poet do after wandering for a whole day? What else can be done after the Professor has discharged her duties diligently and has laid plans for the next day? What else can be done after one has enjoyed a whole day? .......Nothing but have a night of peaceful sleep. This is stunning and soft, well done!

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Salini Nair 24 November 2014

On wings of dreams let me fly Over mountains high and valleys low Winding rivers n' rippling streams Buoyed by breeze which gently blow...........................amazing write on sleep....beautiful....

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