Lull! Comments

no whispers even I do hear, but just the sound of my heart tear! Very touching, full marks Aniruddha Pathak

This pleasant lull, I am sure is the result of being in love with somebody or something! A lovely write radiating sweet contentment

Lovely..in sweet lull forget all your tears Your are a great poet

but still it is a sweet lull I landed in, seems I don't have to care for anything else but being in! - - - - - - - - A lovely write- - - - brings a feeling of calmness.

My heart tear! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The poem is a spiritual one with submission and humbleness. I love such poems. The poet has put his deep thoughts in his work. It is a well constructed, academic poem. ]]]].....it is not so loud for my ears, as my heart perched on 'a beauty' as much as she fears! ....., [[[[ We hardly hear such voices of sages as the poet brought up. Keep the good spirit up, poet! The highest rating for this masterpiece. Thanks for sharing.

‘seems I don't have to care nothing else but being in! ’ …touching finishing rope…yeah stay stoic [you feel ‘sweet’ …here is your poetic mastery] apathetic are but ways of expression of inner suffering… Greater you interiorize better the poetic vision will be…clear...not turbid …lulled but not dulled you’re….lolol Thanks for sharing 10/10. Ms. Nivedita UK