Monday, June 5, 2006

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I picture you
legs bent
feet on your highs
their permanent resting place
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Jane L. Carman
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Gregory Gunn 09 June 2006

Employment of an economic vernacular is quite effective herein a commiserative composition. I could relate to this piece knowing someone who had been afflicted years ago. Sorry about that spiel from before.

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Thats a really touching poem, from Rissa: -)

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Jane L. Carman

Jane L. Carman

Galesburg, Illinois
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