Monday, August 31, 2015

Ludlow's Busking Twins Comments

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Costa coffee, cup large than the table
Steam rising into the warmth of the day
Pleasant chatter, narrow lanes of old
Blue plaques on terrace walls
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Della Perry
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Bri Edwards 18 December 2016

i'll assume Ludlow is the town or a shop/tavern. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 18 December 2016

i now, a year later, see your response to my earlier comment re large. but it is not changed on this page to larger. i forgive you, but in return i shall change the sixth line into two lines (after the hyphen) and change owners to owner's before putting the poem into Section C of Dec. showcase. AND i'll use larger! ! ! ha ha! i hope all is well with you! bri :) thanks for the poem.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 28 May 2016

great read, thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 13 October 2015

About 365,000 results (0.70 seconds) Search Results 1. Costa Coffee is a British multinational coffeehouse company headquartered in Dunstable, England, and a wholly owned subsidiary of Whitbread. It is the second largest coffeehouse chain in the world behind Starbucks and the largest in the United Kingdom. I was going to read all 365,000 results in Google for “define costa coffee british”, but I’ve been busy so I stopped after the first entry. “cup largeR “? hmm? I guess a u.s. member used “buskers” in a poem, or a message to me earlier this year, but I forgot i - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - busk1 bəsk/ verb gerund or present participle: busking 1. play music or otherwise perform for voluntary donations in the street or in subways. the group began by busking on Philadelphia sidewalks o informal improvise. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - did you mean for these ‘two lines’ to be spaced as I see them on the poem’s page, or is PH fooling around again? ……. “Mingled with charity shops, boutiques, easy-going little place, castle walls, friendly faces.” I don’t remember any other PH poet using “pee” in a poem here………………., except me! It was a good thing you didn’t see a gallon of coffee! you might not have made it to the bathroom! ! you DID didn’t you? let me read the whole thing again. I think “owners’” or “owner’s” feet. :) :) if I dropped coins into the butter at home, my partner would ‘kill’ me. she would! ! she eats most of it. an interesting stroll. favorite lines (though I don’t smoke) : “A young holidaymaker sat on his suitcase Lit up a cigarette Listened for a while Clapping at the end.” ……… ……. I debated with myself, briefly, this afternoon over whether or not to drop money into a ‘tub’ (not butter) at the foot of a musician at the local ‘farmers market’. “I” won out over “me”. bri :)

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Della Perry 15 October 2015

thanks bri xx it should say larger xx

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