Ludicrous Is Love Comments

Paul, I regret that you have departed PH due to not having enough Readers here.: ( bri : )

'clan·des·tine /klanˈdestən, ˈklandəsˌtēn/ adjective kept secret or done secretively, especially because illicit.'

Venus: 'In Roman mythology, Venus is the goddess of love, beauty, fertility, desire, , victory, and prosperity' It is also one of Earth's planets AND a famous female tennis player.

I enjoy the alliteration 'miffed and mysterious', BUT why are the stars MIFFED, for goodness sake? ? ? Hmm?

MIFFED: miffed /mift/ adjective (INFORMAL) ' somewhat annoyed; peeved '

LUDICROUS: so foolish, unreasonable, or out of place as to be amusing; ridiculous. 'it's ludicrous that I have been fined' Similar: absurd ridiculous farcical laughable'

Luminous Lunar Glowing Beacon Light thrilling hook lunar images to darkness disc savour luminous glowing beacon night light to lost soul flavour out shine star sparkle twinkle ripple sole neighbour Inspired by the poem 'Ludicrous Is Love' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

'thin arc of bowed buttermilk moon shines like a sliver of cheese' a wonderful juxtaposition of thrilling lunar images to savour

sometimes love rides the train like a hobo searching for a home and Venus laughing hearty winks.- - - oh good images here

A well composed piece. Truly splendid.....10+++

the pen is speechless to say any thing about this heart touching masterpiece of work, it is full of fresh poetic imagery and metaphors, no one can create all these fantastic images apart from genuine poet, we are congratulate you for this success attempt; it is mixture of tragedy, wisdom, imagery, idea, rhetoric devices.. 10++ and it deserves to go into my treasure chest, well done

never in the bright ring of the sun but in the clandestine night.

this excellent poem needs a good meditation and a big review..

sometimes love rides the train like a hobo searching for a home

thin arc of bowed buttermilk moon shines like a sliver of cheese.

" ...never in the bright ring of the sun but in the clandestine night." That is the showstopper... Beautiful! .. Loved it.. Thanks