Lucy's Song Comments

A beautiful poem nicely put together.....

All Nature awakes To glorious day. ..... The peace it has known It can never regain. /// excellent poetic expression

The gay morn breaks, Mists roll away, All Nature awakes To glorious day. sad to read that my joy and light will not come back. tony

So lovely to see the glorious day.

How beautiful at eventide To see the twilight shadows pale, Steal o'er the landscape, far and wide, O'er stream and meadow, mound and dale! ........fantastic beginning with haunting express on eventide. Beautiful poem.

Charles Dickens, author of Oliver Twist, a book I cherished reading while growing up. He is a legend and a gift to mankind. Lovely poem

Smooooooth and lovely descriptives and then the scene darkens when we realize he is mourning

I like in this how Dickens shifts from the eight-syllable rhyming pattern in the first two stanzas to the mostly-five syllable pattern in the third and last stanza—it shows flexibility and suits his purpose. As to the shadows he mentions and the peace he can’t regain, he tantalizes us and leaves it for us to guess. -GK

Such a beautiful poem on nature. But it ended in a sad note. Enjoyed the flow and rhyming. Thanks very much for posting.

Beautiful nature poem with a touch of sadness for a loss that nothing can replace!

A lament for Lucy by a great novelist

'In my breast alone Dark shadows remain; The peace it has known It can never regain.' - How deep is the sorrow, oh God! Bless him!

Even so life shall continue to ebb and flow yes.

A beautiful poem...I enjoyed reading it...thanks,

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Dark shadows! ! Facing life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Nice Nature depiction by masterpiece novelist Charles Dickens!

How soft is Nature's calm repose When ev'ning skies their cool dews weep: The gentlest wind more gently blows, As if to soothe her in her sleep! Beautiful nature, calm, gentle and soothing. Lovely poem.

i love it awesome very nice to read

Beautiful poem with thrilling expression. Thanks and cingratulations to his soul.