Saturday, December 6, 2014

Lucy In Cinderella Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once some children
Said to Grandmother,
"Please tell us a story
We are in wait no bother."
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 December 2014

Nice presentation, words chosen nicely a brilliant poem and the concluding- Prince recognized the quality And inner beauty of her, Here Cinderella vanished And they lived like Zur. thank you deserve more than 10

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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

a nice and thoughtful poem on the inner beauty of a person...great sir

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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

a nice and thoughtful poem on the inner beauty of a person...great sir

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Hazel Durham 06 December 2014

A story about inner beauty that can't be ignored for long, Lucy was kind and had faith in God A prince saw her inner beauty blooming and she became queen! A beautiful write!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 December 2014

The story of Cinderella so beautifully retold in a finely scripted piece.......amazing write.....10/10

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Saheb Mohapatra 06 December 2014

i really liked this poem..........i hope every member will enjoy this beautiful story........greatly enjoyed it......thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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