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Two birds are flying close together
Wings are touching each other
Swiftly across the orange sky
I wonder where they fly.
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A marvelous poem- - -If birds are happy, lovers are happy, why husband and wife walk separate and why they see the lovers or birds as devils? A pertinent question.Sure, love is missing from them.
Profound philosophical message in four stanzas. Thank you for sharing.
Wonderful poem, at this point i think you convinced me that you are a keen observer, yes i know you are a talented writer long time before...Keen observer mean you are able to crafting whats happened around into something relatable...and then convey message for others...i truly enjoyed it Asim :)
The poet has taken a panoramic view of relationships around him and found them experiencing joys or turmoils in life. Only those can be termed as lucky who get through the testing times and come out unscathed. Great poem. Thanks for sharing, Md. Asim ji. Life for some is joy and wonder For others, it's testing and exhausting
I salute you for specific and correct interpretation. You always amaze me with your interpreting abilities. Thank u so much, Rajnishji...
I salute you for specific and correct interpretation. You always amaze me with your interpreting abilities. Thank u so much, Rajnishji.......
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7/26/2025 10:03:47 PM # 1.0.0
Love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thx much my friend Kofi.