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i knew you before i was born, i chose you to be mine
you pondered for months what i'd look like
but i recognised you the moment you held me
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Carolyn Vuletic
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G. Murdock 29 December 2005

I like the metaphysical properties of this poem. I would like to think that we choose our destinies, that souls are like ghosts in the machines. The body as no more than a vessel...the need to love the self running deeper than the flesh...I think the end line makes peace with the self, the soul. This spoke to me.

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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