Luck.... Comments

I can realise your emotional write. but please do not use abbreviation in poetry this is my opinion. keep writing.

good poem, good flow, but you can even do better. just check on some few spelling mistakes otherwise nice work

Good write you need luck on your side in this life!

lovely write thanks for share

gud rhythm. keep it up.. check out my new poem 'why be the next' dnt forget to give ur valueable comment.