Thursday, March 12, 2015

Lucidity Of Love (Tanka) Comments

Rating: 4.8

everything we know
contradicts the mind of heart
everything unknown
unveils its mystery when
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Unnikrishnan E S 28 February 2022

Nice poem. The expression ‘mind's heart' makes flutters in my heart. It is pleasantly intriguing to think that ‘mind' has got a ‘heart' too.

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Darren Jkoeryo 01 June 2020

Truly magical. Nice one a big 10 for this one.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 July 2019

everything unknown unveils its mystery when love reminds us of lost light......I sincerely appreciate your poetic acumen! I admire the way you develop concepts and construct them into beautiful poems with wonderful choice of diction!

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Luz Hanaii 09 July 2019

So true, the heart will take us to beautiful and mysterious avenues. Big 10

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Prabir Gayen 28 February 2019

Very beautiful poem.... unknown is beautiful.... thanks 10+++++++

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Srijita Mondal 10 February 2019

everything unknown unveils its mystery when Love reminds us of lost light 🌺Beautiful poem..thank you for sharing 🌺

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 February 2019

everything unknown unveils its mystery. great poem with depth...... unveiling your philsophy of life. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 October 2018

Nice expression on lucidity of love

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2018

It's a wonderful little poem! Enjoy reading reading it time and again! Amazing ink!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2018

Lovely little poem! Enjoyed the lucidity of expression in lucidity of love....I take it to MyPoemList

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2017

It is a marvellous tanka having an outlook upon love tightly. Though this poem is in concise yet its meaning is so vast. Beautifully painted. Thank u dear Mihaela for sharing this.10

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Michael Hopkins 31 October 2017

Love is the lost Light that for a moment is found. Nice poem.

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Dev Anand 03 May 2016

Love reminds us of lost light love is a great mystery... its passions and romance. everything is a mystery. love ur poems dear Michaela

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Tom Billsborough 21 April 2016

Love perceives more and more deeply. This is a very fine poem, Michela

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Dev Anand 10 March 2016

unveils its mystery when Love reminds us of lost light love and mystery. very nice poem. thnk you dev.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 February 2016

When lovec reminds us of lost light. Thanks for sharing.

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Shahin Latif 20 November 2015

Nice poem. I love this poem. Many many thanks dearest poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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M Asim Nehal 11 October 2015

Sublime Poem......Enjoyed it.

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Amitava Sur 04 July 2015

Such a strong message in a precise form of poetry (ie, Tanka) , Taking about love and state of mind. Loved it

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Rajesh Thankappan 22 March 2015

In the darkness of the lost love, the mind unveils new vistas that contradicts our known perceptions of the heart. A wonderful poem indeed.

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