Lucid Dreams Comments

awesome really gr8 work... choice of words are really inspiring.. thanks for sharing

Carl Jung once stated: Life is a luminous pause between two great mysteries, which themselves are one. I believe you have touched upon that here; where we're from, where we are going, where we are. Good poem.

wow i could some what realte to this

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Ricochet dreams do reflect the mat6ters by dreams.Who is alive and who is die. Only death is killed then the discrimations become great. I am cheung shun sang or call me cauchy3. i come for your previous calls. Thanks for the attentions.Good lucks

dude u r really awesome.. loved ur style of writing

Dreams often seem so real until we wake up. Dead v alive, real v unreal. Good poem.

Really awesome poem...

The line between the conscious and unconscious is thin, but vital. Lovely work, I really enjoyed this.

Lovely poem. thanks for sharing.

Wonderful and vivid poem Dave, a great job.

love the way you cross back and forth through the veil!

wonderful write...again...a message aimed to help us to understand that fantasy and reality are only a thin line apart..blessings

This is a great poem because it sounds just like its real... it painted a great picture in my head... I'm only 18 and only started writing poems about 2 days ago plus today... This was great site to go to... keep up the good work... plan to read more of your poems

THIS IS REALLY GREAT, YOU R TOO MUCH TALENTED, THE WAY YOU PENNED THE POEM IS REALLY PRAISE WORTHY, WELL WORDED, A WELL CRAFTED POEM INDEED, I LIKE THE POEM AS YOU LIKE IT. PLEASE READ MY POEM, I WANT TO DIE’’

I like this poem, it is very meaningful, and the writing is excellent. Great Job!