Thursday, May 1, 2008

Lucid Comments

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Threw a kite out to the heaven
A gust caught up and up it went
So did I, a thousand feet and seven,
Powerless in wrath of nature lent.
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Tiffanie Lein
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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 September 2008

A lovely lucid poem, love it.

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Bob Gibson 16 July 2008

In your dream you soared the sky, then things got unsteady falling swiftly to the ground, for the landing you were not ready the elements were against you, shelter and preservation in the classroom your friend and you, were deep in conversation again your boat was rocked, by a condescending male your teddy bear was white! your right! but that's another tale dreamtime, lovely poem Tiffanie

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Tiffanie Lein

Tiffanie Lein

Vancouver, B.C.
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