Sunday, July 19, 2009

Lozenge For 'He' Comments

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When commitment is distorted
And the words made are derailed,
Illusion smiles and trust lightens
Hope withers and progress declines.
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RUP POKHAREL
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Paul Hansford 11 September 2009

A timely reminder that 'old-fashioned' standards are still valid, and that selfishness is not a good way forward.

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Marieta Maglas 30 July 2009

nice stanza: ''When decentralization is erased And supremacy empowered and praised Tries bleaching the veins bluish He is a man myopically selfish.'' nice analytical poem, well written.................

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