Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Aravayal, karaikudi, Tamil Nadu, South India
Thursday, August 18, 2011

Loyalty And Honesty Comments

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A wife is overlooked by her husband
For her total loyalty towards him.
A maid is overlooked by her lady
For her total honesty in her deeds.
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar
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Hans Vr 18 August 2011

Loyalty and honesty are real great values to be cherished. In my honest opinion, I think the poem would gain much strength is the words tolerated are replaced with 'cherished' But in the end it is the poet himself who knows best. Alll the best to you Rm. Peace

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Aravayal, karaikudi, Tamil Nadu, South India
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