A wife is overlooked by her husband
For her total loyalty towards him.
A maid is overlooked by her lady
For her total honesty in her deeds.
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Loyalty and honesty are real great values to be cherished.
In my honest opinion, I think the poem would gain much strength is the words tolerated are replaced with 'cherished'
But in the end it is the poet himself who knows best.
Alll the best to you Rm.
Peace
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Loyalty and honesty are real great values to be cherished. In my honest opinion, I think the poem would gain much strength is the words tolerated are replaced with 'cherished' But in the end it is the poet himself who knows best. Alll the best to you Rm. Peace