Monday, October 26, 2009

Lowest Point Comments

Rating: 5.0

Vulnerability sets in
Winter cold rubs in
Silver lines drove
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Vinod Kumar 07 November 2009

Nice work of the right season, the greyness and cool of winter may changed our thought of shapes, feel the nice from the agony, while drawing away, the unknown destination....10++

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 November 2009

A visually powerful treat for the Minds-Eye, young lady...Your choice of short-cropt linage and language which carries a semi-lexic tone, is both impacting & abstractively pleasing to this Readers literary yen....Very Fine Work, indeed, Vidi! F j R

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Indira Renganathan 01 November 2009

Climatic change and inclemency Weak and vulnerable Reason-Arctic zone....well said.... thanks.. And thanks for your comment on Aurobindo also

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Mamta Agarwal 31 October 2009

arctic zone inevitable- how true. lowest point, a longest distance in life... good metaphorical write Vidi. Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 30 October 2009

old age hardships...both to body and mind...a helpless 'winter acceptance'! good use of metaphors Vidi...bit enigmatic though...thanks...10

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