Sunday, November 1, 2015

Lower Leaf Is Falling Comments

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While lower leaf is falling down
Upper leaf is giggling at the rate.
Due to pale yellow colour it happens
Aging has left marks on lower leaf.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 15 October 2020

Lower leaf falls down and new leaf arises. This is a nice process of nature.

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Valsa George 07 April 2019

Nature has certain norms! All that is born should fall and decay! Usually the lower leaf may be the first to drop as it ages faster than the lately added leaves! With age, weakening begins to show on the body and the aged ones are the first to die. But if a wind comes, the healthy green leaves also may fall! The time of fall cannot be predicted, but sure, everything has to fall! Enjoyed how you established this truth with an example from Nature!

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Sanjukta Nag 02 November 2015

Circle of life is brilliantly portrayed with wise diction. Thank you.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 November 2015

'Natural processes'; with respect to nature.

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Loke Kok Yee 01 November 2015

nature will takes its course-10

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M Asim Nehal 01 November 2015

And life goes on this earth....new will come old will leave....Awesome poem, Sir.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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