Friday, April 17, 2009

**low Self Esteem* Comments

Rating: 2.7

You say I'm not good with words
And that I don't need herds
Of people around me to make me feel
Any better about myself and it's a done deal
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Magic What'sHerName
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You only touched upon it, but it seems like these strong feelings were brought on by losing the person you love, and I can relate. I don't know when you went through this, but I'm going through it now. And yeah, I too have low self-esteem. I think it's really cool you can admit it in a poem, cuz not many people do. Your poem sounds like my poem, 'If Self-Esteem is a basis of life then I guess I'm bereft of life'. You don't have to read it, but yeah, I can relate. Cool poem.

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Brigid Guthrie 02 August 2009

I completely understand where your coming from and I van relate.. Ive felt like this before and I've been in this situation. I feel this poem is very expressive and well written. Good job Whitney :) 10

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Wow this is deep i so get where you're coming from. If you can, will you read is this how you feel or a dark poem

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Rebeckah Schroeder 25 June 2009

Wow very thoughtful. You can tell this was written from the heart. Just remember it doesnt matter what other people of you all that matters is what you think of yourself. But everyone once in a while you do need a boost from someone. Just know that your poems are really good. Keep writing.

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