Saturday, December 8, 2007

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Five bodies connected
By one’s lust of vital redemption.
A simple Saturday night thrust into a struggling Sunday nightmare.
Shivering and shaking, in fear I cry.
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Lauren Humphrey
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Devin Mckeever 08 December 2007

amazing poem, I love what you did here This poem really made me think it's very deep, and i'd like to say good luck

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