Wednesday, February 21, 2024

Loving You In Winter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rough manly lines and a stark striking blue
Jump out against the season's moody sky
Tracing your depths, my flesh colored anew
I'm jolted from sleep inside my mind's eye
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Falling Awake
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6) the opening image itself oozes sensuality "Rough manly lines…."

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5) top score and to Myfav poems

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4) and finally, when you say " I'll love you spring, summer, and fall too" you said it all

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Exquisitely sculpted into a heart-warming poem. Congratulations, dear poet.

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2) ‘thaw' is defined in Cambridge Dictionary as " to (cause to) change from a solid, frozen state to a liquid or soft one, because of an increase in temperature"…

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Loved this poem on love, sensuality, and love (in that order) in the cold of winter. Enjoyed the gradations of imagery. Culminating in " My vitality until I'm thawed through.."

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