Tuesday, December 16, 2008

Loving You Comments

Rating: 4.5

Living without you is like living without air
Not holding you close makes me feel like a broken glass
Darling if I should choose between you and earth I would certainly pick you
In the mornings you are like a cup of coffee to me that keeps me going
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Chevelle Reid
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Lady Simple 12 January 2010

thank you for sharing. this poem is very powerful in many way. i enjoyed the way you wrote about love without saying love is.... you wrote down what you felt and how life would be with him and without you made the poem very clear and understandable

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Eyan Desir 20 April 2009

Nice composition of love 10s

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Malcolm The Last. 14 April 2009

Chevelle, i don't know about love- but your depiction of it is simply perfect.

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Douglas Palmer 08 April 2009

great poem i realy liked it

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Ana Zaldivar 31 January 2009

Chevelle, This is a wonderful poem. Very unique. I like your style. Best Wishes, Ana

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Jay Hmph 21 January 2009

This is a fabulous poem... I feel that nothing could express this any better than you already have

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 January 2009

oh my goodness what a love intense by desire thunder seems to refrain from the rain by the hue of blue, yet romance parades across the room of moon ness of heart, luscious glow by the passion, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Chevelle Reid

Chevelle Reid

Mount Salem Montego Bay Jamaica
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