Tuesday, July 22, 2008

~ Loving You ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loving you is something that kills me inside
Deep down the real me squirms and hides
It so hard to not care to pretend I hate
Being with you is like going against fate
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Ally Tenebrae
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Victoria Dame 09 August 2008

I like your style and the energy of this poem, nice write.

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Bill Thomas 31 July 2008

So vibrant & expressive: you really have got something here, Ally, the way you get the reader inside your head... has to be a 10!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 July 2008

your poem has fascinated me.keep writing ally.love always.

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Jess Smith 22 July 2008

I think this poem is amazing, really captures emotions.

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Francesca Lam 22 July 2008

I know how it feels like. ur poem is so true. Cheer up! Fran xo

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