Loving you is something that kills me inside
Deep down the real me squirms and hides
It so hard to not care to pretend I hate
Being with you is like going against fate
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So vibrant & expressive: you really have got something here, Ally, the way you get the reader inside your head... has to be a 10!
your poem has fascinated me.keep writing ally.love always.
I know how it feels like. ur poem is so true. Cheer up! Fran xo
I like your style and the energy of this poem, nice write.