Saturday, July 5, 2008

Loving You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Twenty-eight years I want twenty-nine
How could you tell me everything was fine
Why would you even think of dying
Would you really leave without trying
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Victoria Dame
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Dorothy- A. Holmes 08 October 2008

Victoria, I have fought this battle with someone...I know the pain. It is good that you are finding some relief through your writing...please continue...you really do have the voice of a poet. 10! . Come back to read my 'On Being Green' Dorothy

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Viola Grey 05 July 2008

wow...you leave me wanting to know more of this tale...I hope it continues for you...good write

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Victoria Dame

Victoria Dame

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