{loving You} Comments

A brilliant effort! For sharing your thoughts, thanks.

love seems to be true by the dream when as when embraced by the breath as when whispers jingles by the breath breath yet bessortted as rilling the swing, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , beautiful poem, i like it, kindly read similar poem of mine--AS I CLOSE MY EYES-and kindly ciomment, well penned,10/10, thanmks for sharing

You fleck a graceful picture of Love's paradox, Lily...Triplet stazaec construction moves with crisp & glide.Well Done, my dear! ~ FjR ~ .03/08.

A really dreamy poem lillian! ! Love it, a great read! ! ! *10*! ! Thanks for the sharing! ! Best wishes Friend Thad