Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Loving Twice Comments

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If there is a way to love two times,
then teach me how,
because I already loved once,
and I loved with all my force.
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Ana Z. M.
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Oscar Cantu 02 April 2009

A very nice poem. You write very good for such a young age. Keep up the good work. Good luck in finding someone to teach you how to love twice (:

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Noel Horlanda 02 April 2009

You can love as much as you can, it's endless because if you stop loving, you're good as dead. This literary work is excellent, this could be a good lyrics for a love song, yah know? When I was young I used to write love letters and even composed love songs to my girlfriends, three of them. How do you like that? Again, congrats and keep it up. A thumbs up for the young lady from Honduras!

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 April 2009

It so happens that this is a subject I know very well. You can love again. It just takes a little time and distance. This writing is a wonderful example of a fine piece of writing that has meaning and clarity and the necessary ability to connect to a reader because of its identity with the reader. A fine job of presentation by the writer. GW62

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a real gifted heart is here! i will just say wow! to answer how: try first to get your heart empty! find out the things that could make you hate the one you love to love once again! lol! sweet poem!

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Miriam Maia Padua 30 March 2009

wonderful write.. full of emotions... described a picture vividly.. keep on writing 10+++

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Bonnie Collins 26 March 2009

Very tender and emotional write penned from within the walls of your heart. Love can do that ana, however, you will love again, I promice you that. Questioning your soul is only normal, as when you vow to love, you love, hence, why? Why or how can I love again? Please remember, things in life happen for a reason, sometimes the worst of reasons, for now, you have not the end of your puzzle yet..... Very deeply penned and I found this very good...... Bonnie

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Rajaram Ramachandran 26 March 2009

What a convincing logic behind your desire to learn how to love twice, as your love is already more than the sun or moon or roses. Though young bud you are, your thoughts, I find, are so well matured. Keep it up.

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