Monday, July 14, 2014

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One day the little girl was playing on the floor
fallen asleep, she'd open eyes
to find own head on older sister's lap.
There were voices speaking all at once,
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Elena Sandu
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Kevin Patrick 22 July 2014

This was a wonderful story, I was so heavily immersed inside this tale, I could easily see everything in my head as if it were a film. There was something melancholic about this, the bittersweet memories of long ago moments swept inside the halls of time, it reminds me as a child when I was told not to be in rooms where adults talked about serious matters and was forced to take a back seat. A wonderful poem, filled with the clarity and powerful imagery, this was lovely.

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