Tuesday, June 18, 2024

Loving Him Comments

Rating: 5.0

In love with a married man, my heart does ache,
For a love that could never truly be mine to take.
His smile, his touch, they make my soul ignite,
But I know deep down it's not meant to be right.
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Lacie Hebert
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The dilemma, the intrigue of being in love with a ‘married man' is brought out convincingly and emphatically. Beautifully rendered. Top score.

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