Sunday, January 6, 2008

Loving Father.... Comments

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I still remember the day I took you in my arms
with your mom beside me lookin at you so calm
We tried to read your cry, to know what you really speak
but mom and I thought, we really make you freak
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Sebastine Humaemo
mom
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Winnie Angel 25 January 2009

..A day will come for us to close our eyes that time my dear son don't let us surrounded by flies..... expressedly intense in tone and the love of parents mix with true blend...the longing of parents for a child when they become 'Man of today'...nice write..10 fo u sebastine

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 17 December 2008

Another good poem, Sebastine.

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rajagopal haran 06 January 2008

current status of parents-children bondage is well portrayed; in Indian context son is preferred to perform the final rites after death as if the body will not be turned to ashes if a son is not there; many a family the final rites are done to parents by sons very much when parents are alive....great going...fine poem Sebastine lusifer

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