Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Loving Dark Wind Comments

Rating: 4.5

oh how the wind blows oh so free, but i love you. Secretly i hold.
The wind flows though my hair and fills me with new life.

But the wind it tears down the earth with just a breath. The wind changes and never stand still in one place.
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wild forest- E- 01 January 2010

thank you oh so very much! ! !

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A nice one...fully imaginating....and forcing the reader to imagine ur situation... U've portrayed abt wind and its quality very well...

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Marieta Maglas 21 December 2009

nice visual metaphor But the wind it tears down the earth with just a breath nice meditative poem 10

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