Monday, June 26, 2006

Loving Breeze Comments

Rating: 5.0

When a breeze blows through
It brings fresh hope for me and you
because every breeze is a thought
from one who loves you true
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David Darbyshire
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Patricia Gale 29 June 2006

Wonderful, loving thoughts. One of your best! Hugs Patricia

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Ernestine Northover 26 June 2006

A nice breezy poem which lifts up ones spirits. Nicely produced. love Ernestine XXX

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Dee Daffodil 26 June 2006

What lovely warm toughts in this poem. Very creative Dave...I really like this one...it's going in my favorites! Hugs, Dee

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Nalini Hebbar 26 June 2006

really nice dave...never thought of it that way...loved it...nalini

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Francesca Johnson 26 June 2006

Such a sweet poem, Dave. 'Every breeze is a thought.' I will remember that when I go out on a windy day. Very nice poem. Love, Fran the Fan xx

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I love the analogy/logic here. If breeze equals thought, therefore wind equals lots of thinking, in tranquil weather expect a breeze and act to pre-empt the consequence of storm perhaps..... Really well thought-out and put together David. I'm going to remember this one - and do lots of squeezing :) .

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