Friday, July 14, 2017

Lovesong Of A Sunflower Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slowly and silently,
Reluctantly at first, eagerly at last
You open your sleepy eyes
And unfurl your dreamy petals.
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Nidhi Agrawal
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Laurie Van Der Hart 14 July 2017

An awesome poem, Nidhi! Very original and beautifully written.i especially love when the sun goes down/ you take off your majestic crown.

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Nidhi Agrawal 15 July 2017

Thank you Laurie. I've tried to portray it's relation with sun, (instead of its beauty) , which is the hallmark of sunflower.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 July 2017

A beautiful song of nature, Nidhi. Good poetry. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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