Thursday, May 11, 2017

Lovesong Comments

Rating: 4.8

It's been so long now,
Thought that I'd learned to live without it.
But feelings grow strong now
So strong, that it can't be doubted.
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Jonathan Maldonado 27 August 2017

I really like this makes me wonder who inspired the hope in these lines, reminds me we all have a special person(s) that at varying moments bring us up from our lows just when we thought it could never be. +10

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Practicing Poetess 28 August 2017

Thank you, Jonathan, for reading & rating! This particular poem is an oldie mouldy goldie of mine (had to unearth it from the archives!) But your feedback makes it feel fresh & new!

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Barry Middleton 11 May 2017

A very direct approach. Very well written.

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Many thanks, Barry! You surprise me, commenting so late- - You impressed me as an early bird!

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