Sunday, February 10, 2008

Lovesick Comments

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Lovesick

I still house that virus (you) in me
that has slowed me down on daydreams
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sílvia oliveira
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Romeo Della Valle 05 July 2009

Silvia, I can't imagine Love as a virus, hope it is not like one of those that have not cure the type you just die in pain....Great work, keep it up...Peace, Romeo, NYC...

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Rani Turton 12 June 2008

The title links up with the virus and the idea is really good. You have real talent Silvia!

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John Tiong Chunghoo 12 June 2008

i love this one. you have the element to be great, keep on silvia.

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Alex Tiberiüs 09 April 2008

gostei ^^ i really like it

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 26 March 2008

n ice poems..........

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Don Mcwilliams 03 March 2008

Yes indeed. Love as a virus is so appropriate as a description of the one love in our lives that we will never get over. There is no cure... Don

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 February 2008

love when intense by the virus as when virulent, as i enjoy the depth of light, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Amie-Lee ...... 21 February 2008

I have to agree with my mate Doc there. Good work.

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sílvia oliveira

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