Love is the feeling in ones stomach of fluttering,
The butterflies that envelop the pit.
The heavy stuck rock in the bottom of ones throat.
Stubborn as a jackass's retarded growth stunted son.
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You write so creativity and use a good balance of words to communicate the piece Thank you
i'm glad u shared this with me..it would have been pitiful if i would have missed such a fine piece of writing. spectacularly composed and well expressed :)
This was a very good way of expressing all the emotions that rush around your head, when the desire of love and acceptance are on the line!
You have such flexibility of language now, so young, that I can only imagine where it will go as you get older. There's no shortage of style in here. (smile)