Friday, March 13, 2009

Loves Power Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love is the feeling in ones stomach of fluttering,
The butterflies that envelop the pit.
The heavy stuck rock in the bottom of ones throat.
Stubborn as a jackass's retarded growth stunted son.
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Zachary Clark
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Patti Masterman 01 September 2009

You have such flexibility of language now, so young, that I can only imagine where it will go as you get older. There's no shortage of style in here. (smile)

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The Dreamer 17 May 2009

You write so creativity and use a good balance of words to communicate the piece Thank you

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Ridah Ellahi 25 March 2009

i'm glad u shared this with me..it would have been pitiful if i would have missed such a fine piece of writing. spectacularly composed and well expressed :)

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Gordon Smith 15 March 2009

This was a very good way of expressing all the emotions that rush around your head, when the desire of love and acceptance are on the line!

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