Sunday, May 31, 2009

Loves Point Of No Return Comments

Rating: 5.0

carry me to the point of no return
take my heart before it burns
take my soul where ever you go
move fast, don't move slow.
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Christine Kerr 02 June 2009

Beautifully done, yet so hard to find. Sweet thoughts

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'you make my being feel alive. and when i look upon your lips i want to feel your tender kiss. for a kiss, is a kiss, until it's missed. ' beautiful! ! !

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Kranthi Pothineni 31 May 2009

Very nice write. Thoroughly enjoyed my read. Beautiful flow with wonderful title.10.

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Christine Kerr 31 May 2009

Sounds like fiest love to me. Nice to see love being explained.Breautiful thoughts 10+++

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Sandra Fowler 31 May 2009

Very passionate. May your love survive beyond the point of no return. 10.for this. Warm regards, Sandra

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